Sausau's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eternal Law]

Maritime

Sad face on the facade next to the blue character on top left ?

[aztecia]

Questions to root out fools

I've always wondered what you were making this fine art for. Considering it's a tremendous work and amount of time, it would be surprising if you made those drawings just for fun.

lenkalamari responds:

portfolio stuff but it makes for great practice if anything. thanks

[Kevinezation]

Le Plongeur

Kevin Bacon thinks the guy below hasn't got enough Kevin Becon within himself.

[The Power]

Grow will tall

There's definitely a problem with the 5th phalange, on the left of the black hand, it's too far away from the rest of the hand, so is the finger. It makes the hand looks like a square. And this is too bad, because apart from this flaw, the drawing is marvelous.

Willpinoy responds:

that's impossible, because the reference i used looked just like that. So either something's wrong with my hand, or that drawing is correct.

[Good Morning]

June 10 Master

This picture is almost perfect. The main problem is the proportions. The hands are too big compared to the wrists, the upper arm is too thin compared to the forearm, she's got a weird coccyx and her right buttock is a bit angular and flat. But overall that's a nice picture to look at, you succeeded to draw a beautiful woman.

[Sonichu]

Seep your niwe

People have no fricking humour.

sucho responds:

they should read the CWC comics, those are full of good jokes.
MY WOODEN BADGE WAS DELICIOUS

[My Darkest Hour]

Bale out

Weird shoulders. It looks flat and the line of your shoulder and back is too straight. You seem to have some kind of deformation here. The rest is excellent.

corsetfetish responds:

true, just an old work though, made it a year ago. thank you ; )

[H.L. Mencken]

The mortomen are watch the dead

He looks like Franz Kafka.
Also, asymmetry of the face.

[Lion Head]

Seville

You're good at textures and overall design. But, look, your lion is obese ! lol.
Lions have a mane of a different colour than the rest of their body, here it looks either like his mane is covering his whole body, either he's got a shitload of fur on his back. So, the main problem is that, even though the fur of his mane goes over his shoulders, it is "bushy" and looks like hair, here, it looks like bear fur or something.
It looks half-bear half-lion. Scientifically, it's pretty innacurate due to the depiction, not the idea itself, artistically, it's not bad, but nothing special or peculiarly well-drawn.

Zelldoom responds:

Thanks for the comment, yeah, i was thinking about that, the mane was more larger than expected, i was always on zoom so i couldnt notcie it until i uploaded, if i have time i will re-draw this one. Thanks :D

[Inner Darkness]

Die for you

You're probably the most technically skilled artist on newgrounds (if not further). You have you very own style and an exceptional realization, that looks like 18th century paintings, it's so detailed it becomes photographic. But apart from some nice elements (the clouds getting darker as they wave further from the character or the language of the colour schemes) there is not much of your personality there. It's so perfect it almost lacks sensibility. Still, that deserves a good 10, I would feel bad not to give you one.

AlvinHew responds:

Not sure what you mean by personality. I feel that this piece does contain a lot of my personality, but perhaps we are thinking of different meanings of the word. Thanks for the comment.