Sausau's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Think]

Stop the show

No thanks, rest is better

(Improve the symetry of your characters, sometimes it looks disproportioned)

Rutger responds:

Rest is better indeed.
But the symmetry is fine I think. The heads I draw are always not looking directly into the 'lens', so you'll always have disproportioned faces. I did fuck up the eyes a bit though, symmetry-wise.

[Chthulu]

Be sure to loop

I was really blown away until I scrolled down only to see you didn't complete the bottom tentacles. It's too bad you didn't bother including them in the "polished" part, it looks texture-full and the impression of depth is amazing.
Still added to favourites, it is the most refreshing draught I've seen in weeks !

EyeSeaThings responds:

Thanks for the input! But I did make the bottom unfinished on purpose. It wasn't for any job or anything, so I took some artistic liberty and made it work as a piece of art and less of a fully rendered finalized piece (i got yelled at a lot in college for rendering the crap out of everything, so I try to tone it down when I can.)
Again thanks for the critique! I love it when someone sees something they don't like and have the go-nads to tell me. :)

[The beginning of the fire]

The three epees

The text sure looks like Autechre's ludicrous style to name their songs. But this text here doesn't add anything to the drawing. You seem to have drought the thing, and then typed the signs on. Also I don't see what was your purpose. Maybe you wanted to illustrate Autechre music ? Lol man, that's gonna be hard.
Well, it's not a bad drawing, it just looks incoherent. I know 6 is harsh but I can't give a 6.5 :(

[don`t smoke!]

Oretay

Wahaha this is huge man, so full of details. It's insane !
One question : Why is the woman dissecting him ?

[Good vs Evil]

I am boredom

I can't say who is the evil and who is the good. And this is, in my opinion, the biggest tour-de-force in the picture. It's one of the rare analizable images on this site.

[The Heart of Saturday Night]

thgiN yadrutaS fo traeH ehT

"Death holds a scythe. Bitterness holds a cigarette."

Everything has been said.