Sausau's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Think]

Stop the show

No thanks, rest is better

(Improve the symetry of your characters, sometimes it looks disproportioned)

Rutger responds:

Rest is better indeed.
But the symmetry is fine I think. The heads I draw are always not looking directly into the 'lens', so you'll always have disproportioned faces. I did fuck up the eyes a bit though, symmetry-wise.

[Chthulu]

Be sure to loop

I was really blown away until I scrolled down only to see you didn't complete the bottom tentacles. It's too bad you didn't bother including them in the "polished" part, it looks texture-full and the impression of depth is amazing.
Still added to favourites, it is the most refreshing draught I've seen in weeks !

EyeSeaThings responds:

Thanks for the input! But I did make the bottom unfinished on purpose. It wasn't for any job or anything, so I took some artistic liberty and made it work as a piece of art and less of a fully rendered finalized piece (i got yelled at a lot in college for rendering the crap out of everything, so I try to tone it down when I can.)
Again thanks for the critique! I love it when someone sees something they don't like and have the go-nads to tell me. :)

[Arctic Druid]

I like the way you move

Beautiful colour schemes. Nice rendition of movement and awesome drawing. But what caught me the most was the girl. It's harder that one would think to make a woman look pretty and cute AND realistic. Well, by realistic I mean human-like. I doubt some Inuit girl would run down a snowy hill with polar animals ! :p

AlvinHew responds:

Thanks a lot for that!

Yeah, she's an arctic druid, so those are her animal friends. =)

[The beginning of the fire]

The three epees

The text sure looks like Autechre's ludicrous style to name their songs. But this text here doesn't add anything to the drawing. You seem to have drought the thing, and then typed the signs on. Also I don't see what was your purpose. Maybe you wanted to illustrate Autechre music ? Lol man, that's gonna be hard.
Well, it's not a bad drawing, it just looks incoherent. I know 6 is harsh but I can't give a 6.5 :(

[don`t smoke!]

Oretay

Wahaha this is huge man, so full of details. It's insane !
One question : Why is the woman dissecting him ?

[Good vs Evil]

I am boredom

I can't say who is the evil and who is the good. And this is, in my opinion, the biggest tour-de-force in the picture. It's one of the rare analizable images on this site.

[Bath]

Dogs got a bone

"This is pedophily. I am calling the police." Pedophiliac priest from the nearest Church.

If only more artists would be doing what you are doing. Daring. You dare present a nude drawing of a teenager. This is very cute and imaginative. Hopefully, the girl is not sexualized as this http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/kevinsano/etna. It's innocent.

But it's not flawless. The nose seems way too big in comparison with the rest of the face. And she looks like she doesn't have a left breast. I know her arm is meant to hide it, but it would at least make curves on her skin or maybe the teat would be noticeable. Here it looks like one-breasted woman.

Despite these defaults, I fav'd it, because I love the idea.

Oelbachtaucher responds:

Thanks haha ^^
You are right I should have drawn another breast.

[The Heart of Saturday Night]

thgiN yadrutaS fo traeH ehT

"Death holds a scythe. Bitterness holds a cigarette."

Everything has been said.

[Spongebob]

Two Hearts in 3/4 Time

All I have to say is that Spongebob doesn't have a buckle to his belt.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

he's not rendered in horrifying detail either